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Outlook unique
Source of laughter
Summited the peak
Hero ever after

Silken mane
Sun's silhouette
Life's vane
Gait, a pirouette

Metiér
Joy bringer
Bubbly flair
Muffin giver

Community's creation
Birthed from adversity
Seeking salvation
Personal clarity

A spark
Nurtured
Verily, a barque
Uplifted

Wings unfurled
Abilities shining
Courage of the world
Continuously striving

Indomitable pegasus
Daughters' guardian, mentor
Mind focus
Happiness' donor

Mother's responsibility
A choice
Paragon's ability
Her voice

Hooves outstretched
Fan and producer
Rarely matched
Synergy inducer

Eyes drifting,
Never more graceful
Never more unwavering
Never more inspired

Always beautiful.

A tribute to the multi-faceted pony, fittingly embraced as the mascot of out community. A tribute to her as a mother, as a mailmare and as a symbol of triumph, love and peace.

Thanks to :iconzedrin: for allowing me to use his fitting and adorable work entitled "Derpy and Dinky WP" as the preview image for my poem.

For an all-round media experience, here are my favourite Derpy songs:
1.) "Troubled Bewilderment (Derpy Hooves inspired composition)"
2.) "I'll Be Waiting (Derpy's Song) - original MLP song by MandoPony"

In the spirit of alleviating repetitive messages, I would like to, at this juncture, thank each and every one of you most wholeheartedly for viewing and/or commenting and/or favouriting this piece. I truly appreciate the support!
:iconderpyhappyplz:

Disclaimer:
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic and accompanying intellectual property (the pegasus pony named Derpy), developed by Lauren Faust, are copyright by Hasbro, Incorporated. I do not own nor make a claim over the intellectual property on which this poem is based.
The preview image, Derpy and Dinky WP, is copyright by DeviantART member *Zedrin. I do not own nor make a claim over this piece.
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PonyMystic Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
BEAUTIFUL
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks much! :)
:iconmlpspikeplz:
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PonyMystic Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yw :)
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:iconmylittleprimo:
MyLittlePrimo Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
:happycry:OMG, this is beautiful!
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:iconlight-of-dusk:
Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very kindly!
:iconapplejacksmileplz:
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MyLittlePrimo Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
May Derpy Hooves live on for generations to come!
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Dalekgirl117 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yay Derpy
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
:icontwilighthappyplz:
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:icondalekgirl117:
Dalekgirl117 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome!
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TotemEye Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Who is this little pony by here side? :U
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Dalekgirl117 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that is here daughter Dinky
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:icontotemeye:
TotemEye Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Is she in the show?
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Dinky (fan-name) being Derpy's daughter is not actually canon, but Dinky does appear in the show. In mostly all fan-fiction (but not all, I'm sure), Dinky is portrayed as being Derpy's daughter.
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TotemEye Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Ohhh alright. Thanks for making it clear for me!
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Dalekgirl117 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think so
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww!!!
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:iconlight-of-dusk:
Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yay!
:iconfluttershyyayplz:
Thanks!
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:iconbrnin8or:
brnin8or Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Eeyup~
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ardashir Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
This is a very sweet poem to dedicate to Derpy. :iconfluttershyyayplz:
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:iconlight-of-dusk:
Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank ya kindly!
:iconapplejackishappyplz:
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zebrapoe Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh, Derpy.
She will always remain in our hearts
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
True, very true! :D
:iconpinkiesmile2plz:
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Gariandos Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Derpy is misunderstood, but she has a caring, beautiful soul.
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very true. I hoped to bring to light her grace and beauty. :D
:iconapplejacksmileplz:
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AmazingChee5e Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is great! Derpy FTW!!! XD
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! Yay for Derpy! :D
:icondashhiyaplz:
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AmazingChee5e Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
YUS!
Omg I just saw derpy in a snowglobe.. :dummy:
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davidbillups Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
aaaaawwwwww! so awesome! well done!
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! I appreciate it!
:icontwilightshappyplz:
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Angelofspace Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
So sweet. :3
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You have my thanks!
:iconfluttershyishappyplz:
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Angelofspace Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
Thank you.And your awesome!
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Electroll4800 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student Artist
wow this made my day
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Glad I could brighten up your day! :)
:iconpinkiesmile2plz:
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DRAGONSLAIR434 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
This amazing piece of work is going riiiiiiight to my faves.
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks very much! I'm pleased that you enjoyed the poem! :D
:iconraritysmilingplz:
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DRAGONSLAIR434 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
you're welcome!
:iconderpy-hooves:
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:iconkarlanvomega:
karlanvomega Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
[link] It reminded me of an inspirational song from Derpy :D
Love this!! :love:
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
What a lovely and emotive song! It truly is the highest freedom and peak of beauty to be oneself without criticism from others.
Thanks very much for your comment! :D
:iconfluttershyhappyplz:
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karlanvomega Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:blushes: Your welcome! :D
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Maggie-X-Awesomeness Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful.
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Many thanks!
:iconhappytwilightplz:
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Maggie-X-Awesomeness Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yay!
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portaljumper339 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student General Artist
The fanbase really doesn't give her enough credit as a character, and that is a shame. Good job for bringing the fandom's golden girl to light!
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for your comment! I hoped to praise her in my own small way. :D
:iconderpyhoovespeekplz:
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breakability Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconiloveyouplz: so touching... //sniff
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! She is quite an awesome pony! :D
:iconlunashappyplz:
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breakability Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconbrohoofplz: heck yah she is~
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Wolfking164 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
Man, thanks. This is very nice.
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure! Thank you for the comment!
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